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Illustrated portrait of Jim Breit

A character in The Dud Avocado

Jim Breit

A young American painter who offers Sally affection and a less theatrical relationship while Larry is absent.

What they want in Sally Jay’s account

To build an artistic life and a serious relationship without waiting indefinitely for Sally to decide what she wants.

The book

Cover of The Dud Avocado by Elaine Dundy
The Dud AvocadoElaine Dundy, 1958

A pink-haired American charges through 1950s Paris in pursuit of freedom, theater, sex, and every bad decision that promises a good story.

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At a glance

Work
Painter and occasional photographer
Relationship
Sally’s lover during Larry’s absence
Connection
Later marries Judy

Who they are in the book

Spoiler-free

Jim belongs to the artistic Paris Sally wants to enter, but he is less invested than Larry in turning every encounter into a performance.

Sally begins a relationship with him, then loses the possibility of a shared future when she returns to Larry’s orbit.

How the book draws them

Appearance, manner, and tone — as the book sketches them, in our words.

  • Young American painterHe is near Sally’s age.
  • Practical work clothesThe portrait suggests an artist without adding studio props.
  • Open steady gazeHe offers a calmer alternative to Larry.
  • Mid-century appearanceThe period is clear without costume.
  • Close engraved bustPaintbrushes and canvases are omitted.
  • Muted olive accentThe subdued green suits his steadier role.
What happens to Jim BreitHow the book leaves them, what happened after, and what the record says. Open when you're ready.

Sally leaves Jim behind when she joins Larry’s coastal trip. By the time she returns to Paris, Jim and Judy have married.

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